Sugar

Planet Paradise, pages 89 and 90. I decided midway through the rough draft of this story that the main character is not the kind of person who swears and would instead use swear substitutes like "fudge" or "golly." I didn't make a note of this, though, and I had completely forgotten it by the time I began work on finished pages. While working on the finished draft, I recently came to this conclusion again, not realizing I had already made that conclusion. Then, drawing these pages today, I saw the word "sugar," and I was reminded that I had already made that decision several months ago. Anyway, I'll have to go back and do some editing on a few earlier pages.