Thanksgiving

Planet Paradise, pages 82, 83, 84. I went with a sort of half-spread with pages 82 and 83, but I'm not sure if it quite works. The upper panels of the pages connect, but the motion within those panels is right to left, which goes against the way one's eye instinctively moves across the page (if one has grown up reading left to right). The panels on the bottom read right to left, so there is potentially conflict between the to tiers of panels. I think it will work if the upper panels read as one panel despite the break. Looking at it smaller here on my computer it does read that way, and I think it will increase with less blank space around the edges of the page, which is how I intend the finished book to look.



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